(To the tune of "Lemon Tree")
When I was just a lad of ten, my father said to me,
"Come here and take a lesson from the lovely lemon tree.
Lemon tree very pretty and the lemon flower is cool.
But never use a lemon as a kind of killing tool.”
I learned that there were knives and guns and even strangling rope.
But lemon as a weapon? You’d have to be a dope.
Such killing would be messy and would leave a lot of blood.
Your new career as hit man would be nipped right in the bud.
With a huge and heavy grapefruit you’d have at least a chance.
But a “killer lemon”? Silly – it’s clear right at first glance.
“Take my advice,” said my old man, “and never join a mob.
Avoid all citrus slaughter – get a different kind of job!”
9 years ago
36 comments:
Loved this - 'Citrus slaughter' - I suppose if you got the lemon juice in someone's eye, it would wound slightly.
I shall be singing Lemon Tree for the rest of the evening! LOL
Oh, those lemons are tricky. Be careful.
Oh that is great! I will be singing Lemon Tree too!
hahaha! this is GREAT!
great post as always!
Perfect! Love the rhythm to your poem, clever twists aided in its drink.
And yet they have such atrociously long (and sharp) spines on them...
Don't know about the rest of your fans, but I'm going to be singing this all day long while I dance around my home dreaming of the tropics....
Brigid, Jinksy, thingy, Kristen H, Leslie, Kathe W, Reflections, spacedlaw and Helen -- thanks for some great comments.
It actually made a lot of sense..nice rhyme
and I meant I liked this Magpie
and your latest post about gatsby
Clever piece!
Hilarious.
Ditto with the song in my head, only different images will float around now. Very well done.
Very wise advice. A lemon does seem an unlikely weapon!
In the end, really good advice. This was fun!
Here's mine:
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/03/02/ideal-afternoon/
"Forensics and lemons
Say the Bells of St.Clement's"
(English nursery rhyme, bent to suit your excellent post)
For Trellissimo.
"My thank-yous and 'mercis'
Say the bells of St. Percy's." :-)
heheh - somehow I was expecting to read something about Lady Macbeth...out, out damn spot was too obvious perhaps
I like this game!
"When things turn sour
Say the bells in the tower"
Great fun post, Berowne! Blood-spatter forensics supplemented by lemon-juice spatter!
Dr. FTSE: "Great fun post, Berowne!"
Great fun comment, Doc -- thanks.
Heh heh. I loved this one. Got the essence of the picture all right!
Ah Peter, Paul and Mary. I have sung the whole poem to that tune! It works well as does your poem.
And when the father gives his son some serious advice, the son had better take it :)
Mobs really don't make good lemonade either... So it's use AT ALL joining them :)
A superb take on the prompt, my friend... I think it's very natural for me to sing this one out aloud... no?! :)
Kavita: "I think it's very natural for me to sing this one out aloud... no?"
Go right ahead. And I'll join you in the harmony part. :-)
Lena: "Heh heh. I loved this one."
Great comment, Lena -- thanks.
Cannot take a lemon to a grapefruit war. Nice mag!
I have had the most difficult week of my life, and now having read about the citrus slaughter, I am laughing my ever lovin' arse off!!!! Thank you ;-)
Great rhythm and rhymin'. Full of zest!
Elaine: "Full of zest!"
I always enjoy citrus humor -- thanks. :-)
Kim N.: "This was fun!"
Glad you enjoyed it, Kim.
Ha ha--"Attack of the Killer Lemons" sequel to the infamous Tomatoes. Well done!
ds: "Ha ha--"Attack of the Killer Lemons"
What a great, highly artistic movie that would make. :-)
What a hysterical poem. I loved it. I was thinking that, death by asphyixiation might work if you put a lemon in somone's mouth. I finally came up with a poem at:
http://rnsane.blogspot.com/2011/03/magpie-tales-55-its-not-nice-to-eat.html#links
Very funny! I entertained myself singing it. :)
RNSANE: "What a hysterical poem. I loved it."
Mad Kane: "Very funny!"
Fine comments -- a great way to start the day.
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